Good Film Opening (Star Trek)

The scene begins with a wide establishing shot of the U.S.S Kelvin approaching a disturbance in space beside a sun, the camera angles and movements give a disorientated feel as it pans across the ship without giving a clear indication of up or down. In this establishing shot there are very few sound effects as this is set in space but there are beeping signals and voices over a radio. There is no uncertainty of who the baddies are in this story. The first introduction to them is a huge frightening looking ship coming through the storm, it’s a dark metallic colour and seems to be made of jagged spikes and blades and light does not reflect or shine off it while the Kelvin does. Inside it is dark and smoky everything about this Romulan ship screams “evil!” The Romulan villains invite the captain of the Kelvin to their ship after a brief but devastating attack on the Kelvin then kill him on board after interrogating him, leaving Kirk in charge, we are momentarily fooled into thinking this is our main hero James T Kirk but it’s in fact his father George Kirk. The Romulan ship attacks using spiky missiles and one particularly effective shot shows the scene from the missile’s point of view, from the Romulan ship through space and exploding on the hull of the Kelvin, accentuating the destruction. George must stay on the bridge to protect the evacuating crew and plot a collision course into the Romulan ship. Meanwhile his wife is giving birth to his son in an evacuation shuttle, there is an emotional exchange as George explains to his wife in labour that “he can’t be there” and for about 30 seconds there are sounds except for a few muted explosions and a stirring sound track. A lot of enigmas are created in this opening sequence what and who are the aggressive aliens, why are they looking for Ambassador Spock and why were they so upset when the captain of the Kelvin tell them the year? In the end it gives the audience an emotional start to the rest of the movie and there is a sense of emotional ambivalence as the audience is distraught that Kirk’s father dies but elation as baby Jim and his mother escape.

The villains of the movie are the alien Romulans, they are darkly dressed, have tattoos on their faces, no hair and sinister voices and there seems to be no females. This representation of the Romulan characters is not complicated, the producers and directors want to make it obvious that these are the baddies and their space ship is just as bold, it’s huge and threatening next to the Kelvin, it looks dirty and it arrives through a lightning storm in space and storms and lightning are often associated with doom and danger. George Kirk is a typical Hollywood hero, he is young hansom and strong looking and clearly very brave to go down with the ship to protect his crew mates, he sits in captain’s chair all alone on a burning ship, facing death and lives for just long enough to name his baby boy

The contrast in the villain’s and the human language is very apparent although both sides are speaking English, the Romulans are cool and calm while the suffering crew of the Kelvin are shown giving panicked orders and tearful goodbyes. Throughout the scene the camera jostles and shakes as if it’s reacting to the scene like a news reporter and light from the explosions and nearby sun flares in the camera lenses.

Good Noir Film Opening

Amazingly simplistic and plain but powerfully atmospheric. It’s a very short opening, barely 2 minutes long and containing only two cuts. Element of mese-en-scene suggest that there has been some kind of violence, an explosion maybe and the actresses costume shows she is a bride. The black and white picture is a style of filming rarely used in modern film but it’s used in this case to give the audience a sense of nostalgia. The sound is realistic and completely diagetic, bill’s footsteps, cocking and firing his gun and the woman’s breathing all add to a realistic viewing experience.

Brick (2005) A Neo-Noir

In a modern-day Southern California neighbourhood and high school student Brendan Frye's ex girlfriend is missing, he becomes consumed with finding her. He enlists the aid of his only true peer, the Brain. Brendan's single-minded unearthing of students' leads him to rich-girl sophisticate Laura, intimidating Tugg, substance-abusing Dode, seductive Kara, jock Brad and the Pin. Only by gaining acceptance into the Pin's closely guarded inner circle of crime Brendan uncovers the truth about Emily and his classmates and their terrible secrets.
This movie is a great example of modern or Neo-Noir, not only the dark plotline and shady characters but the execution of action, deliverance of dialogue and classic cinamatic teckniques. The snappy dialogue and exchanges keep you an you toes just like the noirs of old. Brendan’s an anti-hero like Sam Spade (the postman always rings twice), aggresivly inteligent and ruthless in his convictions, an outsider and loner with few friends, a model of noir-ness. The Fem Fetal of the picture is played by a pretty doe eyed Laura is just like phyllis dietrich in double indemnity; playing innocent and victimised but truly a dangerous player in the underworld. Low key lighting is used in the more dangerous and suspenseful scenes like when Brendan is taken to meet the Pin, deep shadows are employed in other scenes like Brendan finding Emily’s body in the creek. Long tracking shots and still images of locations create senses of claustrophobia and lonlyness just like noir movies like the maltese falcon.

Preliminary Exercise Evaluation

The purpose of the preliminary exercise was to familiarise ourselves with filming equipment editing software and sound equipment. Overall the sequences were relatively smooth and the action was easy to follow, there was good continuality, the sound was clear, the 180 degree line was not crossed and all action was laid out well on the camera grid lines. There were a few things needed to be improved though. There was no clear establishing shot of the corridor because we focused too much on the feet of the actor and due to rushed filming handles were forgotten to be incorporated, this led to difficulties during the editing process and clipped dialogue.

Preliminary Exercise

This exercise was our first attempt at filming, we were required to show someone making an entrance and starting a conversation with another actor while keeping to the rule of thirds, maintain continuity and use as many shot types as possible

Double Indemnity Analysis

Representations :
Phyllis Dietrichson: (first impression) blond beauty, stylish, long suffering wife, slightly abused, introduced into story half naked, drinks ice tea, is in love with Walter.(last impression) femme fétal, manipulative, probably murdered before, unkind to Lola her step daughter, unloving, liar, uses Walter.
Lola Dietrichson: innocent, young, brunette, step daughter, unhappy, secretly dating Nino who her father disapproves of, shown to be crying quite often, mother dead.
Mr Dietrichson: Sleazy, ugly, old in his 50s, sometimes abusive, neglectful to family, drunk borderline alcoholic, does not inspire sympathy from audience, fat, works at an oil field.
Walter Neff: Slick salesman, tall and handsome, successful, talks in fast short sentences, calls Phyllis “baby”, confident, prefers a beer, very masculine, smokes a cigarette, single.
Mr Keyes: short, intelligent, good instincts his “little man”, smokes cheap cigars, Walter’s friend and employer, single though almost married a girl till the “little man” told him to check her background, never seen wearing a jacket or blazer like the other insurance people, a good heart under a hard exterior.

Audience: The audience respond to the characters and situations depending on how they are represented. We as the audience watching the story unfold have ideas put in our heads through out the picture and the people inside it, we have little sympathy for Mr Dietrichson when he is murdered because we don’t like him as we briefly get to know him through witnessing his behaviour ourselves and hearing about his habits from his wife. The audience’s response to Phyllis Dietrichson changes as the plot progresses, at first we strongly sympathise with this beautiful long suffering wife and almost find ourselves egging her on to get rid of her abusive husband, but as we get to know her and hear about what her step daughter has to say about her and we grow suspicious and realise we’ve fallen for it just like Walter.Industry: director Billy Wilder’s directorial choices in this film reflected his belief in the primacy of writing, he avoided the exuberant cinematography and shots that called attention to themselves would distract the audience from the story. Double Indemnity is a typical Claudio Carvalho script and story, full of dark tricks and deception with an unhappy ending. Billy Wilder is in his element in working on such a story and double indemnity was one of his most well-known and celebrated works.

Language: what each character is saying and how they say it has a profound effect on the story and the audience, the movie’s catchphrase “it was murder at first sight” uses the popular saying “love at first sight” so we understand that this is a romantic story with a dark twist. For the most part the tone of all the characters is casual that is only moderated when Walter and Keyes meet an executive of the company. Walter Neff’s language is simplistic, short and to the point, very similar to Keyes’s style and typical of film noir dialogue. Phyllis talks with a smooth breathy tone almost all the time when she’s with Walter but switches to sounding professional and in charge during more formal scenes with undertones of seduction.

Narrative: Walter Neff provides the narration throughout the picture, starting from the first scene as he confesses to the crime in Keyes’s office and during significant moments in the film when its appropriate to know what he was thinking at the time. If Walter had not been narrating in key moments of the film the story would have been harder to follow as it provided a lot of insight to where the plot was going, we could not have known certain things like when Walter was driving away from his first meeting with Phyllis, he described the smell of honeysuckle as he travels down the drive, “I didn’t know then…that murder could smell like honeysuckle” the voice overGenre: As a film noir picture the film must meet a certain criteria; dark deeds, devious motives, black widows, crooked characters and death. Double Indemnity is a quality film noir classic as it provides all the shady twists, flawed characters and murderous plots that noir demands.

What is Neo Noir?

Neo noir is a genre directly related to film noir, neo noir is basically film noir but with more modern shooting and storytelling while many themes and lighting techniques and Mise en Sene from contemporary noir are used. Contemporary noir themes of cynicism, suspicion, dead ends and darkness are used in neo noir as well as specific characters and roles like feme fatals and hard boiled protagonists are recycled into modern stories with new twists. Some cinematic features of film noir are replicated in neo noirs like Sin City despite technology allowing otherwise has chosen to be black and white, preserving the contemporary noir ambiance and classic feel of grittiness and claustrophobia.


Brick 2005 Directed by Rian JohnsonBrendan Frye is a student of a nameless American High School who finds his ex-girlfriend murdered on the school campus and takes on the challenge of finding her murderer himself. After a frenzied phone call with her the day she was murdered, mentioning “the Brick is bad” Brendan suspects she had fallen in with the drug addict clique. The dark and suspicion fuelled story line and a protagonist searching for answers is a classic recipe for a film noir but modern shooting techniques and setting make it more relevant to today’s audience.

Sin city 2005 Directed by Frank MillerFour tales of crime adapted from Frank Miller's popular comics, focusing around a muscular brute who's looking for the person responsible for the death of his beloved Goldie, another man fed up with Sin City's corrupt law enforcement who takes the law into his own hands after a horrible mistake, a cop who risks his life to protect a girl from a deformed paedophile and a hitman looking to make some cash. The black and white colour scheme marks it out as something different and gives the whole film a nostalgic feeling, the dark characters and the plots they follow are distinctly noir-esque but it is all set in a modern 21 century city.

Blade Runner 1984 Directed by Ridley Scott Deckard is a Blade Runner, a police man of the future who hunts down and terminates replicants, artificially created humans with limited life spans. He wants to get out of the force, but is drawn back in when 4 "skin jobs" (a slang term for replicants) hijack a ship back to Earth to seek out there creators to find a way to live longer than four years. The oriental city that Deckard must search for his prey is huge, smoky and claustrophobic which makes a fine setting for a noir film, modern or classic. The sense that the enemy may be among us in disguise is a theme in noir cinema that can be applied to any vehicle of paranoia in a society of the time, in the 30s and 40s it was the secret police in Europe and in the 80s it was communists and A-bombs, this film brings back that look-over-your-shoulder feel to the cinema that classic noirs mastered and re-models it to a science fiction fantasy that revives the most themes and techniques from the 40s